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                       三千年前的靜默

                                                           如影片迴路

                                               峰迴路轉

                                   三千年後的致謝

 

                                   張啟沉睡的眼睛

          

                                                                          

                                                                   

                                                                    敲 

                                                                   

                                                                   

                                                            孱    開    

                                                                弱的靈

                                                                    靈

                                                                    

 

                                   只為

                                   望不盡的回路

                                                   轉迎

                                                       前方     露餡的     笑顏 

                                                   心意                                 

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這首詩
2008/05/06 00:14
這首詩讓我想到紅樓夢...晚安!
高興的事情,應該仔細算清楚,才能左右平衡。別讓壞的一邊愈來愈重。
紫逸昕(pkj228) 於 2008-05-10 19:36 回覆:
為何?是哪個情節呢?寶玉與寶釵,或是寶玉與黛玉?孔子曰:詩可以興、觀、群、怨。或許你說的,就是這當中的其中一類吧!