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坤》Today the frog day
2007/05/08 22:35:51瀏覽781|回應2|推薦6

today big rain,
so there comes frog man,
within' green skin they have,
with the shy and smiling face,
there goes green hands,
there goes green legs,

there goes the happy mind and clone yours right away,

they become glad when skies grays,
they do disaopint while cloulds faded away,

they wish it's frog day everyday,
which is today's rainy day.

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福坤獸[很忙碌]
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謝謝~
2007/05/18 16:47

喔喔~

對唷...

沒發現到我打錯了..^^..

謝謝您,我已經改了~



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正哦. 韻押得真好~!
2007/05/14 13:16
可是最後一句RAINY有點不順哦~!