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ChiCheng Hsu Writer at SCT ltd co.

     The Wind of Time    Hsu ChiCheng

 

The wind keeps blowing

Now slowly

Now fast...

 

When it passes by the tree leaves

The tree leaves turn yellow, then fall down

When it passes by buildings and houses

The buildings and houses turn old, then collapse

When it passes by you and me

Our hair turns gray and we begin to look blurred

Winkles and old age speckles appear on our skin

One after another...

 

Now fast

Now slowly

The wind of time passes by

World of Poets 2013/11/28

Mrs. Margaret Ann Waddicor said:

The wind of time Hsu,
this is a strange tale, is it an old fairy tale in your country?
I feel it is, just as the wolf blows the house down in
The Three Little Pigs fairy tale in English.

"I'll huff and I'll puff and I'll blow your house down"

A dramatic nursery story that ends up with the wolf
falling down the chimney of the house built in brick,
he didn't manage to blow down; and getting burnt by the fire.

Margaret Ann

By Margaret Ann Waddicor

World of Poets 2013/12/02

Hsu responded:

What a wonderful old fairy tale "The Three Little Pigs "fairy tale in English is!

 But it's the different symbolism in Chinese. There is an old saying in Chinese:"We watching the buildings raised and watching them fell down." The wind of time owns the great power to make all things success and destroy them. That's the main sense of this poem. Thanks your comment, dear Margeret Ann Waddicor.

World of Poets 2013/12/03

 

 

中文原詩如后:

時光的風    許其正

 

風,吹過

一陣陣,不間斷

或疾或徐……

 

吹過樹葉

樹葉由綠轉黃、掉落

吹過屋宇

屋宇由新變舊、坍塌

吹過你我

你我髮漸蒼,視漸茫

甚至叢生皺紋和老人斑

吹過歷史長廊……

 

或疾或徐

一陣陣吹過

風,時光的風

 

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2013/11/29 18:28

時光的風 隨時光 轉來轉去

由如 歲月催人老 一樣

好有意思  詩   謝謝分享

天冷 注意保暖

其正(cchwr131949) 於 2013-11-29 21:47 回覆:
歲月何止催人老?萬物也難逃脫他的毒手.

多硯坊 (休)
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2013/11/29 16:36
時光的風
東南西北
春夏秋冬
吹拂著四季的夢
其正(cchwr131949) 於 2013-11-29 21:51 回覆:
時光如風,吹遍東西南北,吹得春夏秋東團團轉,連人也被吹得東倒西歪.

心念
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2013/11/29 13:00

呵  不想太多

風吹過

冷  加衣

熱  感受撫觸時的清涼

哩

其正(cchwr131949) 於 2013-11-29 21:54 回覆:
如果是一般的風,那就沒什麼;時光的風才會搞怪:"眼看他起高樓,眼看他樓塌了".多嚴重!

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2013/11/29 10:13

歲月如風一樣地流動

雖然不近人情

雖然想握住風

但一不經意風卻從掌心悄悄溜走

只留下縷縷回憶,風吹四季牽動著季節更替

歲月的年輪儘管刻在臉上印出皺紋

那就在心裡,留下無數的感念

瑀璇問候其正老師

天冷多加衣物掰掰(881、咕掰)

其正(cchwr131949) 於 2013-11-29 11:16 回覆:

歲月如風,風過水不痕,誰也握不住,只待"看他起高樓,看他樓塌了",只待髮蒼,齒搖,膚皺,視茫,方才驚覺歲月已奔過.有作為,有創作,或可勉強在風中留些消息吧!

天真的冷了.謝謝關心.也請多加衣.


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2013/11/28 16:18
不照鏡子都不察覺
其正(cchwr131949) 於 2013-11-28 21:04 回覆:
時光的風,一陣陣吹過.雖似無所覺,卻是很可怕的.