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Snowscape Hsu ChiCheng (Amendment 2014/1/27)

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ChiCheng Hsu

Writer at SCT ltd co.

Snowscape Hsu ChiChen

Facing a snowscape
I am standing here
Facing a snowscape

This is a snowscape that occupies a boundless land
Which stretches to distance and infinity …

The boundless blanket of whiteness, refusing
To melt, is more extensive and expansive

Watching it I am filled with fright
Watching it I feel colder and I tremble more

A snowscape which is colder and which trembles more upon watching
A crown of white hair which brings more cold and fear

Panayiota Ryall said:

Snowscape Hsu ChiChen - I imagine that you are speaking about the snow in this poem, but at the same time I feel that you struggle with the whole idea of becomming old... please let me know if I am right, but if not, help me to understand your words which I feel are very deep and meaningful. Thank you.

By Panayiota Ryall

(World of Poets 2014/1/27)

Hsu's response:

Yes. You are right. You felt very deep and meaningful. From the snow to white hair is a great association. Do you think so? And still I struggle with the age. May I a stupid or a fool? I'm so stubborn! A fun!

Hsu ChiCheng

(Worla of Poets 2014/1/27)

Once more Panayiota Ryall said:

Panayiota Ryall

Research Diplomate in Logotherapy and SRN - specializing in adult survivors of child abuse

Dear Hsu Chicheng - thank you for your kind responses. I do love that you have represented the whitening hair of old age with the snow. We so often talk about "the winter of our lives" when we talk about old age. You are a good man and I feel a great spirit in you when I read your work. Thank you. I am relieved that it is not a great sadness that you suffer from, but rather a stubbornness on becoming older. I imagine that you try to live each day for all it is worth and extract whatever beautiful experiential values you can extract from each and every experience you can still hold onto and believe in. You’re special!

By Panayiota Ryall

(World of Poets 2014/1/27)

Again Hsu respond:

Yes, I represented the whitening hair of old age with the snow. The socalled "the winter of our lifes "is just the old age, don't you think so? And I'm now just as you said:"you try to live each day for all it is worth and extract whatever beautiful experiential values you can extract from each and every experience you can still hold onto and believe in." Thank you a lot.

Hsu ChiCheng

(World of Poets 2014/1/27)

Then, Marie from Israel said:

Marie

Marie Israel

House wife and poet at Free lance poet

Dear Hsu Chicheng

You are not stupid but a very beautiful person who has a heart and feelings like everyone else. Remember that no matter how old you are you are a worth while person.

(World of Poets 2014/1/27)

Hsu's response:

Many thanks. I'll remember and do my best to fulfill "that no matter how old you are you are a worth while person. "

Hsu ChiCheng

(World of Poets 2014/1/27)

中文原詩如后:

雪景 許其正

面對一片雪景

我站在這裡

面對著一片雪景

這是一片佔地很寬廣的雪景

伸展向無盡的遠處……

白茫茫的一大片，不但

不消融，而且越伸展越寬廣

我越看越覺心驚

我越看越覺寒冷越發顫抖

一片越看越寒冷越顫抖的雪景

一片越看越覺寒冷越顫抖的白髮

( 創作｜詩詞 )


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