網路城邦
上一篇 回創作列表 下一篇  字體:
Paying in installment Hsu ChiCheng (amendment 2014/1/17)
2014/01/14 09:32:01瀏覽836|回應8|推薦86

ChiCheng Hsu

Writer at SCT ltd co.

Paying in Installment Hsu ChiCheng

Since our birth
Consciously, or unconsciously
We are all paying in installment

In our youth
We were unconscious of it
We were energetic, hopping and jumping
We knew nothing of the world, naïve and optimistic
We were all courage, dreading nothing
Some even took life as playing soccer
Actually not that we were not paying in installment
Until some day
We are caught with illness
We are weakened of our body
Do we realize we have to make careful calculation
But often it is too late
We lack time to make it up and to cherish
And we are in a flurry
Alas the sun slants westward
How to keep it from westering?
When we went to the doctor
How much surplus value do we still have?
How fine is the setting sun?
How brilliant is the sunglow?
Regret? Sigh? Thump feet?
Our life declines toward the tomb, and on the declining
Green leaves cannot avoid yellowing and withering
And fruit cannot avoid maturing and dropping

World of Poets 2014/1/14

 

Panayiota said:

Paying in Installment Hsu ChiCheng - again, I read an immense struggle with aging. How values and wisdom also grow with age. Torn between the wisdom that has grown in our old age and the freedom of youth we once knew... if only we could have known and enjoyed both at the same time. I love your work.

By Panayiota Ryall

(World of Poets 2014/1/27)

Hsu's response:

Yes, we all have an immense struggle with aging. The life is a long way for us to experience, and we pay installment to it. We work hard in every period of it. Above all, we'll do our best at what time we are.

Hsu ChiCheng

(World of Poets 2014/1/27)

 Margaret Ann Waddicor said:

Margaret Ann

Margaret Ann Waddicor

Student at Old Age pensioner

Age is one thing, it's not the fact that we are old, but that we deteriorate, and if we have pain or suffering in any form, that is hard, but our attitude should be the same as when we are young, to enjoy life while its here, live in the moment, never think of the future or the past as anything but decoration of the mind.

GOOD GRIEF

Good grief, how breif this life when ageing fast,
the days, the months and years, they go right past
as if they were express, we love with less of stress,
our heart beats slowing down, the light fades
for our eyes, aches and pains they multiply,
and yet we sense the dawn, the sunset, eve,
and smell the perfumes of the scene,
when nature blooms again.

Margaret Ann Waddicor 20th December 2012.

(World of Poets 2014/1/27)

Hsu's response:

Hi! It's true that "Age is one thing","our attitude should be the same as when we are young, to enjoy life while its here, live in the moment, never think of the future or the past as anything but decoration of the mind." The most important thing is "live in the moment, never think of the future or the past as anything but decoration of the mind." In short, do the best now, don't think of anything else.

Hsu ChuCheng

(World of Poets 2014/1/27)

 

中文原詩如后:

 

        分期付款    許其正

 

自出生時起

或知覺地,或不知覺地

我們都在分期付款中

 

年輕時候

我們比較沒那種知覺

我們精力十足,活蹦亂跳

我們懵懵懂懂,天真樂觀

我們一身是膽,什麼都不怕

有人甚至把生命當足球踢

其實那時並非不在分期付款

等到有那麼一天

病痛加身了

體力漸衰了

才突然驚覺,才要精打細算

但是往往已時不我予

要彌補要珍惜已措手不及

於是手忙腳亂

奈何日已西斜

如何讓太陽不西墜?

當常到醫院看醫生時

人生的剩餘價值還有多少?

夕陽能有多好?

晚霞能有多燦爛?

後悔?悲嘆?頓腳?

人生向棺槨傾斜已止不了,拉不住

綠葉免不了變黃枯萎

果實免不了黃熟墜落

 

 

( 創作詩詞 )
回應 推薦文章 列印 加入我的文摘
上一篇 回創作列表 下一篇

引用
引用網址:https://classic-blog.udn.com/article/trackback.jsp?uid=cchwr131949&aid=10554081

 回應文章

沐雲
等級:8
留言加入好友
2014/01/17 08:20

真是發人深省呀!

其正(cchwr131949) 於 2014-01-17 18:44 回覆:
是否儲蓄?是否儉省?或該珍惜當下?

聃星
等級:8
留言加入好友
如常
2014/01/17 07:29

在人生旅程中的人,事,物

都是


時光流連,歲月忘返。聃星。       
其正(cchwr131949) 於 2014-01-17 18:42 回覆:

世間人來人往,不分期付款者幾希?


冠慧~
等級:6
留言加入好友
2014/01/15 19:40

其正 老師好

人生本來 就是這樣 有人 就有 死

所以 珍惜 身體健康 多多走動

把身體顧好 可以到處 踏青ㄛ

其正(cchwr131949) 於 2014-01-16 13:12 回覆:
說人一出生就註定邁向死亡,應該沒錯.但即使如此,還得活出個什麼來!

緣 綺 (暫別ㄛ)
等級:7
留言加入好友
2014/01/15 18:53

人生猶如戲劇,每人扮演著自己。

在未取得劇本前,我不知下一步要扮演什麼戲碼。

存錢是為了添增生活色彩,儲存健康是為了點亮生命。

這是我未發表文章中ㄉ片段,分享給老師ㄛ~

晚安安呦~

其正(cchwr131949) 於 2014-01-16 13:16 回覆:

"存錢是為了添增生活色彩,儲存健康是為了點亮生命。"為了"分期付款",得儲存"資本".

趕快把大作寫好.祝成功!


心念
等級:8
留言加入好友
生老病死
2014/01/15 15:00

都是必然的過程

每個當下都珍惜了

應就無悔

說到底

還是當下的心  最為重要…

其正(cchwr131949) 於 2014-01-16 13:18 回覆:
把每個當下都珍惜了,否則怕會後悔.

多硯坊 (休)
等級:8
留言加入好友
2014/01/15 12:21

春蠶絲盡
蠟炬淚乾

才知用過頭了

其正(cchwr131949) 於 2014-01-16 13:20 回覆:
如何做到適中?怕有點困難.盡力而為吧!

Aisha / 拙陶
等級:7
留言加入好友
2014/01/15 04:39
很有意義且獨特的解譯,我們確實都在分期付款^^
其正(cchwr131949) 於 2014-01-16 13:22 回覆:
為分期付款,怕得儲蓄.

mate : 國會議員大戰奇觀
等級:8
留言加入好友
忽略了生命價值
2014/01/14 17:03
懵懂的消費者
其正(cchwr131949) 於 2014-01-14 18:58 回覆:
人往往自己在分期付款消費而不自知.