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快活與創禍

 

人生要快樂,

社會要祥和。

不要有天災,

不要有人禍。

 

天災已是

不得已也不好過。

何必還要

自添麻煩自創禍?

 

古人曾說:

天作孽猶可躲,

自作孽不可活!

 

不要以為,

你一時僥倖,

會落得個快活。

 

或早或晚,

你會得報應,

生和死都難過!

 

立刻會遭,

自責與天人責!

 

終生難逃,

死後也難解脫!

 



英文譯詩附後,並請斧正。

此詩版權公開,歡迎轉載。

 

 

 

Happiness and Human-evil

 

Life is to be happy.

Society is to be peaceful.

Do not have natural disaster.

Do not have human evil.

 

Natural disaster is already

unbearable and uncontrollable.

Why make and add unnaturally

some more of our own trouble?

 

An old saying says:

Penalty from heaven’s evil,

yet can be evadable.

Penalty from our own evil,

never can be escapable

 

Do not think

you can be really lucky,

so you can wind up

to be very happy.

 

Sooner or later,

you’ll get what you deserve.

No matter dead or alive,

you’ll be very sorry.

 

Perhaps promptly,

you can feel the punishment,

from your own heart,

from both human and heaven.

 

All your life,

you can’t evade the penal pain.

Even long after,

you’ve escaped into final haven

 

 

02/02/2015

 

 

 

 

 

 

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宋子平老師
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2015/02/07 09:34
人為亦是創禍?
早安!
戈 筆 揚(Y282686) 於 2015-02-10 00:25 回覆:

不错,人為亦是創禍。

所以,人类都要慎行、善行。


金大俠
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2015/02/04 09:56
中英好詩,佩服!

這"創禍",為何不用慣常的"闖禍"呀?

步調緩慢的波多黎各(世界日報家園版)

〈出作業〉
電影之路(十)——〈拍片囉——殺青日〉
電影之路(九)——〈拍片囉——處女秀〉
戈 筆 揚(Y282686) 於 2015-02-04 18:49 回覆:

金大俠一句話,老小子騰雲駕霧矣!多謝!

闖禍創禍略有不同。一係惹是生非,一係無事生非。一或無心之罪或無賴毛賊,一係處心積慮可巨奸竊國。一個可包含另一個。 

大俠是因貴人多忙,未及細思,一時不察也。


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2015/02/03 16:51

Thanks again for sharing your wonderful poetry on "Human and Human-evil". I prefer the English contents. I aboslutely agree with your writings. I think that natural disaster can also be preventable if there is good environmental maintainence and protection. The manmade disaster is mainly the result of selfishness and lack of morality. Human will finally receive the penalty for manmade disaster and have to suffer for it.

戈 筆 揚(Y282686) 於 2015-02-04 06:21 回覆:

I agree with you that some of the natural disasters can be avoidable if human beings can keep a good environmental condition. The manmade disasters are mainly caused by human selfishness and lack of human ethics. I have written a poem entitled “Source of Turmoil”, there is one stanza written as below:

 

It is ultimately

due to human’s selfishness,
and further blatantly

harms others to benefit oneself.

 

I am glad to know that you prefer the English translation of the poem. Usually an original poem is always better than its translation. It’s unusual for me that I can make a translation which is better than its original version.

 

Thanks again.