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Imagine By J.C.
2010/04/12 11:39:06瀏覽1231|回應12|推薦108
Imagine a world without flavor
Your food would have no savor
Food would tasteless
And taste buds, we'd have less and less 


Imagine a world without scent

The best smelling flower would cost a cent
And you could brag all day
For sniffing some hay 


Imagine a world without feeling

Your head wouldn't hurt if hit by a ceiling
If slapped by a friend
You'd think there's nothing to mend 


Imagine a world without sound

Where hearing will never be found
Writing would be the only communication
And none of us would have elation 


Imagine a world without sight

Where you won't ever see the light
You'd walk around blindly
Bumping into each other none too kindly 


Aren't you glad

That it's not very bad
To have senses?








為了鼓勵我家不愛作文的孩子們,我承諾將他們的作文放上我的部落格。這是我兒子代表班上參加新詩創作的作品,歡迎叔叔、阿姨們以中、英文多多鼓勵他。謝謝大家。






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Great job J.C.
2010/04/21 08:25
I learn to imagine from your poem
沙漠之花(bealin) 於 2010-04-22 10:36 回覆:
謝謝您。

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值得褒獎
2010/04/17 03:31
不繼續寫,可惜喔,是人才ㄟ
沙漠之花(bealin) 於 2010-04-17 14:15 回覆:
謝謝您,我會努力。


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perfect
2010/04/16 07:38

Yes, I enjoy all kines of senses

They make the world better and better


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like mother like son
2010/04/15 16:19

恭喜令郎得到妳的真傳

文筆這麼出色

難怪能脫穎而出唷


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To J. C.
2010/04/14 08:06

So everything is such marvelous

We must know how to contentment and garatitude


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沙漠之花(bealin) 於 2010-04-16 11:36 回覆:
Thank you.

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Imagine By J.C.
2010/04/13 22:19

We have more senses after we read this great article.

沙漠之花(bealin) 於 2010-04-16 11:35 回覆:
Thank you for enjoying the poem.

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Ordinary & Extraordinary
2010/04/13 12:12

Through imagining the lack of ordinary senses, you found how extraordinary it is for us to be blessed with them. This is truly an inspiring piece of work, J.C.!

沙漠之花(bealin) 於 2010-04-16 11:34 回覆:
Thank you for telling me.

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佳作
2010/04/13 11:28

很棒的一首詩

如果J.C.能試著用中文來寫作

那就更棒了

沙漠之花(bealin) 於 2010-04-16 11:33 回覆:
我會努力。

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好棒的創作
2010/04/13 09:59
 我們期待你一篇篇的佳作喔!
用你們的眼睛,心靈看這世界
讓阿姨重溫一下
已經忘記的感覺.....
謝謝 J.C.

沙漠之花(bealin) 於 2010-04-16 11:31 回覆:
謝謝阿姨。

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John Lennon
2010/04/13 08:09

Imagine a world without internet,

       我們就看不到 J. C. 寫的詩了.

有沒有聽過John Lennon 的 Imagine?

        I think you'll like it.

Apple

沙漠之花(bealin) 於 2010-04-16 11:26 回覆:
謝謝您。我喜歡 John Lennon 的 Imagine. As you can see my Chinese is bad.
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