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Odd  Ball

The  head  is  square.

The  soul  is  pure.

Odd,odd,odd,

It’s  easier  to  count  than  to  be.

Kick, Kick, Kick,

To  be  kicked  around  day  and  night

By  those  weird  dreams.

Roll,roll,roll,

To make efforts to roll over lots of holes.

Would you like to be a bulb

Maybe we can light up the world.

Don’t  you want to venture

Get  out

To  explore  the other globe.

          Ripple Chao,2009,3,1,night

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Odd Ball
2009/03/04 09:35

It is an amazing poem without any errors. At least, I couldn't find one.

I enjoy the meanings between lines.

Being an odd ball with a pure heart of caring, sincerity, and a square head of self-discipline( acceptance, willpower, hard work, industry, persistence) is unique.

Yeah, it is cool to roll and roll and explore the world with an open-minded attitude, even from time to time, the odd ball has to be kicked or not be understood or appreciated by others.

I believe the odd ball can bounce up and down, left and right, back and forth joyfully with its own dreams, self-discipline as well as helpful and hopeful hands.

Thanks for sharing me your odd ball and inspiring concepts between lines.

Wish you a great day with smiles.

趙路得(lude001) 於 2009-03-06 19:31 回覆:

I am glad  that   you enjoy the meanings between lines.

You   can   read   my   mind .I  am   so   happy  about 

 your  love.


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Would you like to ba a bulb?
2009/03/04 01:34


A TEACHER

A BULB

A CANDLE

為人師表

好有一比

是一盞明燈

指引著路

是一隻蠟燭

燃燒自己

苦口婆心

諄諄告誡

身教言教

望之成材

偉哉

善哉

敬禮

感謝


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趙路得(lude001) 於 2009-03-06 19:21 回覆:

好有趣的圖片喔

我希望自己就像圖片中的蠟燭

雖然短小

卻可使周遭充滿了

光與熱

再度謝謝您喔