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2008/10/15 17:07:05瀏覽973|回應3|推薦11

Panda

Write  a  poem  like  a  panda

Two  eyes with big black circles

Lead  readers to bamboos  world

Enjoy  my  poems like a panda

Touch  those furry thoughts

Attract   everyone  by   nature

   

    Ripple  Chao   2008,10,11night

 

 

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2008/10/23 08:04

I do believe the more you write, the better way you will find to avoid Chinese English.

Actually, I do believe languages are used to communicate the meanings. As long as you put efforts on it, you will discover some surprises there. Enjoy yourself writing more English poems. I will be pleased to be the loyal reader.

Wish you a great day at work.


老查居士新書4-明月依然在心底
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問安
2008/10/19 23:11

路得吉祥

這是問候語  沒別的意思鋼琴

我不排斥任何宗教

我教會的朋友很多   彼此不排斥

有時也到我家隔壁教堂  幫他們彈鋼琴

雪謙我就不清楚了

祝如意


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wow impressive
2008/10/15 19:42

I love your first English poem which is cute but sincere enough to a reader. Keep trying. You will be a marvelous English poem writer pretty soon. Wish you a great day and a fantastic night.

Helen

Ps. Thanks for sharing me with your cute " Panda"

趙路得(lude001) 於 2008-10-19 13:09 回覆:

Dear   Helen:

      Thank  you   for  your   appreciation   and  encouragement.

      I  will  keep  trying  trying  trying~~~