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2010/09/21 13:39:10瀏覽511|回應3|推薦6

Two lines

 

 

 

To sustain youth is a line
To obtain wisdom is quite another

 

 

The youth is like a jerk line

which is unable to fasten a swift horse.
The wisdom is like a joint line after an operation,

which sews and patches up the healthy organs retrieved by the time stitch by stitch.

           趙路得寫於2010,9,20

PS:At first  I   write   this  poem   in   English.But  my  English  is  poor  I  feel  much  difficult  about“猶似手術後的接合線

將那些被時間回收的健康器官

一針一線地

縫綴起來

I  will  ask   for  my  English  teacher  正芳she  can  teach   me   and   correct   this  poem.

 

 

 

 

 

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good thought
2010/09/22 11:23

我也來試一試:

青春是一條線

智慧是一條線

如果在青春的線裏藏進智慧的種子

當青春的線走到尾端

智慧的萌芽將綴起青春的延續

這時的青春叫做長青

常青的線因為智慧的加執

更見生命的力量


趙路得(lude001) 於 2010-09-26 13:19 回覆:

Thanks  for  your  response. I am  so  glad  that  you are  interested  in   my   poems.長青”is  evergreen???我欣賞妳的聯想———因我們的生命經過無數次的焠鍊便進入長青期囉!!

 


Happiness
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Two lines
2010/09/21 23:42
兩條線
持續青春是一條線
獲得智慧是另一條
青春宛如一條
無法拴住飛馬的韁繩
智慧猶似手術後的接合線
將那些被時間回收的健康器官
一針一線地
縫綴起來

Two lines
To sustain youth is a line
To obtain wisdom is quite another
The youth is like a jerk line which is unable to fasten a swift horse.
The wisdom is like a joint line after an operation, which sews and patches up the healthy organs retrieved by the time stitch by stitch.

Happiness
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I will be back.
2010/09/21 15:17

I am off to work now. I will share my opinion here later at night.

Have a great day.

Stay healthy and keep happy.

Helen