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Shelter

 

When I  feel pains

My  eyes with sorrow

Become two wings through wind

flying to  the blue sky

 

 

When I  am  exhausted

My bed is like a meadow

The pillow is made of grass and sheep

Let me roam through many unforgettable dreams

 

 

How come I have to prepare for exams

Each night is like big ark

In the dark

A piles of textbooks make me

Going blank

When I  shiver

Heavy clothing is my shelter

When I  have the run

The  toilet is my shelter

 

 

Where is  my soul’ shelter

Dad in heaven always holds my hands

My soul turn out to be a new-born baby

Lying in Mom’s arms

   

          Ripple Chao2008,11,19 night

 

 

 

 

 

 

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2008/12/16 12:58 【Happy Helen】 My first Christmas card

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Shelter
2008/11/26 23:40
When I have pains

My eyes with sorrow

Become two wings in the wind

Flying to the blue sky

When I am exhausted

My bed is like a meadow

The pillow is made of grass and sheep

Let me roam through many unforgettable dreams

How come I have to prepare for exams

Each night is like a big ark

In the dark

Piles of textbooks make me

Go blank

When I shiver

Heavy clothing is my shelter

When I have the run

The toilet is my shelter

Where is the shelter of my soul

Dad in the heaven always holds my hands

My soul turns out to be a new-born baby

Lying in Mom’s arms

To be honest, I do enjoy reading and appreicating your third poem. The meaningful topic with different perspectives of viewing " Shelter" touches my heart, especially the last four lines--I cry into tears and think of my late Mom in the heaven. Yeah, lying in Mom's arms makes my soul turn out to be a new-born baby.

All I can say is simple ---Heart beat are countless, Spirits are ageless, Dreams r endless, Memories are timeless, but your " Shelter" is priceless.

Thanks for sharing this GREAT peom with me. It is my honor to read your poem and show my appreciation with you. Wish you a great day.

Thanksgiving is upcoming. I am thankful to have a friend who is willing to share some marvelous thoughts into poems.

Helen
趙路得(lude001) 於 2008-12-05 19:08 回覆:

Dear   Helen:

          I am  glad  you  like   my   third  poem. I   don't   know  you  also  miss  your  Mom.  God  will  help  us,

We  can  learn  more  from  death  .