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A Waltz of White Clouds
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  • ChiCheng Hsu

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    A Waltz of White Clouds Hsu ChiCheng

    1

    A group of white pigeons
    Have flown into the cotton wadding
    Has the moonlight seen it?
    Have you seen it?

    A group of cotton waddings
    Have flown into the moonlight
    Have the reed flowers seen it?
    Have you seen it?

    A group of moonlight
    Has flown into the reed flowers
    Has the thick fog seen it?
    Have you seen it?

    A group of reed flowers
    Have flown into the thick fog
    Have the snowflakes seen it?
    Have you seen it?

    A group of thick fog
    Have flown into the snowflakes
    Have the white pigeons seen it?
    Have you seen it?

    A group of snowflakes
    Have flown into the white pigeons
    Has the cotton wadding seen it?
    Have you seen it?

    2

    A group of white pigeons
    Have flown into the cotton wadding
    A group of cotton waddings
    Have flown into the moonlight
    A group of moonlight
    Has flown into reed flowers
    A group of reed flowers
    Have flown into the thick fog
    A group of thick fog
    Has flown into the snowflakes
    A group of snowflakes
    Have flown into the white pigeons

    A group of white pigeons
    A group of cotton wadding
    A group of moonlight
    A group of reed flowers
    A group of thick fog
    And a group of snowflakes
    Have all flown into
    A sort of leisure…

  • World of Poets 2014/8/9

  • 中文原詩如后:

  •      白雲圓舞曲    許其正

     

             1

     

    一群白鴿

    飛進棉絮裡

    月光看見了?

    你看見了?

     

    一群棉絮

    飛進月光裡

    葦花看見了?

    你看見了?

     

    一群月光

    飛進葦花裡

    濃霧看見了?

    你看見了?

     

    一群葦花

    飛進濃霧裡

    細雪看見了?

    你看見了?

     

    一群濃霧

    飛進細雪裡

    白鴿看見了?

    你看見了?

     

    一群細雪

    飛進白鴿裡

    棉絮看見了?

    你看見了?

     

               2

     

    一群白鴿

    飛進棉絮裡

    一群棉絮

    飛進月光裡

    一群月光

    飛進葦花裡

    一群葦花

    飛進濃霧裡

    一群濃霧

    飛進細雪裡

    一群細雪

    飛進白鴿裡……

     

    一群白鴿

    一群棉絮

    一群月光

    一群葦花

    一群濃霧

    一群細雪

    啊,全都飛進

    悠然裡……

     

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watwih
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2014/08/12 06:27
what a beautiful poem!
其正(cchwr131949) 於 2014-08-12 12:07 回覆:
Thank you. I used the waltz to write the clouds. It just an intimation.

曖曖
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2014/08/10 21:41

感謝許老師〜

總帶來正向的詩文!!

鼓勵人心^_^

其正(cchwr131949) 於 2014-08-12 12:15 回覆:

詩寫雲如迴旋的華爾滋舞蹈,由白鴿,棉絮,月光,葦花,濃霧和細雪組合共舞.

謝謝指教!


媺媺
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2014/08/10 08:45

看見,就是那麼的單純簡單。

然而,我們通常走的太匆匆,

反而,視而不見。

其正(cchwr131949) 於 2014-08-12 12:17 回覆:

看似單純簡單,往往有其不單純簡單之處.

謝謝!