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No pain(s) , no gain(s) 【英文作文】
2008/06/01 18:20:48瀏覽1000|回應3|推薦3

【No pain(s) , no gain(s)】試寫英文作文

  Winning is 99 percent perspuration and one percent inspirstion. Nothing comes easily in this world. If you're not willing to work hard , you will not achieve anything. It holds true in all kinds of work. For example , studens should study hard to learn their lesson and get good grades. Although Mozart has talent but he still practices playing piano a lot in order to marvel everybody.

  Anything you dream con come true. The Americans have a saying:if at first you do not succeed , then try , try again. But whatever you may try , you can't achieve success without will power and perseverance. So people who work hard are the most successful. 

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2008/09/12 05:10

这不是一片完整文章哦,,INTRO跟BODY连在一起了,CONCLUSION可以多加点自己的话,,,BODY写3段3个DETAIL就是篇很好的ACADEMIC文章了,,还不错哦。。。我想找些写作俄人聊聊天,,有空可以加我哦,,QQ是549353906。或MSN,jayl12345@hotmail.com..       还有facebook也可以。。

優依(youi8267) 於 2008-10-22 08:59 回覆:

謝謝大大的指教唷,目前還在練習寫作中...希望能把文章寫純熟後再和大家交流。


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2008/06/15 21:31
第4行的students打成studens了
不過整體上寫的不錯
優依(youi8267) 於 2008-10-22 08:59 回覆:
謝謝你唷!

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優依(youi8267) 於 2008-06-01 18:34 回覆:

如果有需要的話,優依可以把翻譯放上去唷!

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