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306 wk1Q10~Please describe your most unforgettable trip.

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Please describe your most unforgettable trip.

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	53617

Please describe your most unforgettable trip.

2009/04/20 13:20

My unforgettable trip is that I go to Taitung with Theresa. That day is my birthday. And she give me a big birthday gift that is we going to be having a traffic accident. But fortunately, we still live now.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-26 12:20 回覆：

Ying-chu,

Did you try to say that the trip is unforgettable because you escaped from a traffic accident?

What on earth happened on that trip?

Why did you almost have an accident?


	53641

Please describe your most unforgettable trip

2009/04/19 00:00

I believe my most unforgettable trip is the year I stay in America. It was very worth it and fun, I hope I can stay at there forever. The place is very different if you compare it with Taiwan. I am sure you will love it just like I do.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-26 12:17 回覆：

Xu-chen,

You should provide your audience with some more details on the reasons why this trip is unforgettable.

They could be

1. your first time abroad

2.different lifestyles you experience

3.nice weather, food, etc.


	53615陳依鈞

306 wk1Q10~Please describe your most unforgettable trip.

2009/04/18 23:44

Once a time, I go to Kenting with my friend we are seat beside beach with sky-colored water in a beautiful night. This moment, we see a shooting star to draw through sky.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-26 12:13 回覆：

Yi-chun,

Please provide specific time and decribe your trip in past tense in this case.

Consider the following response.

The most unforgettable trip that I had so far is my summer trip to Kenting two years ago.

I went with my junior high school friends.

We stayed in a nice hotel and went to see the star on the beach at night.

I could hear sea water splashing and people chatting.

All of a sudden, my friend and I saw a shooting star flying through the dark sky.

It was our first time to see the shooting star.

We were so thrilled.

My friend and I both made a wish.

It was the most unforgettable trip that I had so far.


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W1Q10

2009/04/17 13:13

I think my most unforgetable trip might be the junior high school graduation trip. My classmates and I sang in the bus, played together, or did anything we can do in the bedroom. That's really a happy trip.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-26 11:58 回覆：

Yi-xin,

You may consider adding a bit more details to your response.

You could perhaps emphasize on the highlights of your trip or the meaning of this trip.


	53610

Please describe your most unforgettable trip.

2009/04/16 15:11

My most unforgettable trip is my junior high school graduation trip. I go to my junior high school graduation trip with my classroom. It gives me very impress experience. I would never forget this trip.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-26 11:55 回覆：

Fang-yi ,

You should explain why this trip impressed you.

Give the audience a bit more details on what specific things that made this trip unforgettable.

The reason could be the scenic spots that you visited or something that happened on the journey.

In addtion, you will need to use past tense to describe your trip because it happened in the past.

Lastly, I think you might have a typo.

It should be "classmates" not "classroom."


	53609楊宜欣

W1Q10

2009/04/13 17:07

.....I don't remember any trop I have had before.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-13 23:54 回覆：

Yi-hsin,

You might fail this question if you give such an answer when taking the GEPT exam.


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slhs53629

2009/04/06 14:49

My most unforgettable was a trip to Hualian with my family member. It was our first time to go to beach. On the way to Hualian, we saw spectacular scenery along the countryside. The sunshine was bright, and the wind was cool. When we got there, we play volleyball and had a barbecue. We all had pleasant memories there.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-13 23:56 回覆：

Lily,

Good answer in general.

Pay attention to your consistency of tense.

......we played volleyball....


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slhs53635

2009/04/06 13:03

I unforgettable trip is junior high school graduation trip. Because I can travel and sleep together with my classmate. I think it's very good experience to me. I can also travel popular place and take many beautiful pictures. So I think the trip is unforgettable.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-14 00:01 回覆：

Wen-chi,

You will need to reconstruct your argument.

Your argument sounds a bit weak to me.

You need to point out the reason or reasons that made the trip unforgettable.

Also, please change your first sentence into the following one.

The trip that is the most unforgettable to me is my junior high school graduation trip.

(There is a grammatical error in your first sentence.)

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