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306 W1Q7 ~ If you have three wishes, what do you wish for?

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If you have three wishes, what do you wish for?

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	53615陳依鈞

306 W1Q7 ~ If you have three wishes, what do you wish for?

2009/04/18 22:36

If I have three wishes first one I hope my family has healthy body. Second one I hope I could to travel round the world, visit different culture and lifestyle. Third one is I hope I am the richest women in the world.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-26 10:32 回覆：

Yi-chun,

Please consider the following answer.

If I have three wishes, I would wish for the following ones.

First, I hope that my family are all in good health condition so that........

Second, I wish to travel around the world, visiting different countries and experiencing diverse cultures.

Through traveling, I ..........

Third, I wish to become the richest woman in the world.

I would be able to ..........


	53617

If you have three wishes, what do you wish for?

2009/04/18 15:57

First, I want to become a rich person, second, I would like to be a pretty woman and third I would ask for another 100 wishes.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-26 10:26 回覆：

Ying-chu,

Please elaborate more on your wishes.

It's very clever of you to ask the third wish in this way.

However, I think that the answer might sound a bit impractical.

You may change it to a more specific wish.

Try again!


	53641

If you have three wishes, what do you wish for?

2009/04/18 15:43

If I have there wishes, first I want be a rich woman. Second, I would ask to be a hot girl. Finally, I would want three more wishes!

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-26 10:23 回覆：

Xu-chen,

Please add some more details to your wishes.

This is a 30-second question.

You response would probably only be about ten seconds.


	53610

If you have three wishes, what do you wish for?

2009/04/16 13:51

First, I wish my English will become much better. Second, I wish I have the ability to travel to another country. Third, I wish I have enough money to take my family to travel aboard.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-26 10:21 回覆：

Fang-yi,

You may consider adding the reasons for these wishes to meet the 30 seconds requirement.

Also, be aware of these two words: aboard vs. abroad

In English, we usually say "to travel abroad."

"aboard" means to get on a ship, train or plane.

Check out the following information.

http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/aboard_1


	53609楊宜欣

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2009/04/13 16:29

If I have three wishes, first, I hope my family and friends can be happy and heaithy forever. Second, I hope I can have more time to stay with my family. Third, I hope I can buy a big house for my family.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-20 23:53 回覆：

Yi-Xin,

You may consider modifying your answers as presented below.

If I have three wishes, first, I hope that my family and friends can lead a happy and healthy life forever.

Second, I hope that I can spend more quality time with my family.

Third, I hope that I can afford to buy a big house for my family.


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2009/04/06 12:05

If I have three wishes. First, I want to go abroad with my family. Second, I want have money to buy new house and I like thing. Third, I hope my family can health and peace to pass everyday.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-13 23:46 回覆：

Wen-chi,

You might consider adding a bit mote details to your answers.

Your response might be around 15 seconds.

You will need to expand your answer a little by adding some explanation to it.

Also, please change the second and third wishes into the following.

...I want to have a good amount of money to buy my family a new house and the things that I like.

....I hope that my family stay healthy and live a happy and peaceful life.


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Re:If you have three wishes, what do you wish for?

2009/04/05 10:05

If I have three wishes, first, I wish I could became more healthier so that I could have the opportunity to pursue my dream. Second, I wish I could have wisdom to overcome all the difficult situations. And finally, I wish I could enjoy every day in my lifetime so that I would not live in vain.

aflwonderland(aflwonderland) 於 2009-04-13 23:41 回覆：

Lily,

Meaningful and wise answers.

There is one point that I would like to remind you.

The comparative of "healthy" is "healthier."

You might want to change your answer from "more healthier" to "much healthier."

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