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《小嫩子的英文詩》Reflecting on Dali's Persistence of Memory
2008/12/20 09:54:08瀏覽543|回應1|推薦18

Memory

Time is a part of memory

The time of what happened

Clock

Time

Going on and on

Melting

Things are flexible

Time is stretching

Dry

A person is dreaming of the memory

Dreaming

Visualizing

Memories going on and on...

七歲的小嫩子寫於UCLA實小十九號教室 12/2008

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the flight of time
2008/12/21 21:30

I don't know

where my time goes and

my memory just seems to melt  away

i can't visulize

so she is smart


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19室班媽(AdEv3630) 於 2008-12-22 02:41 回覆:

You are being too modest.

Kids see things in a different way from adults, which often gives them insight to life.