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2011/04/20 11:02:37瀏覽639|回應1|推薦3

A dog called Baggio

Last year, I was on duty with Baggio at a dark night when I heard some voices from a jewellery shop. ' Give me all the jewellery! Or I'll kill you!'

I ran to the jewellery shop immediately. I saw three robbers were holding a packet is small in size of jewellery and one of them was pointing a gun (槍) at a man. I tried to stop them but they hit me.

Meanwhile (在相同的時間), Baggio barked fierecly (兇猛地) and chased (追趕) the robbers. But the robbers got on their car and one of them threw a packet of jewellery next to a rubbish bin carelessly. Then, they drove away.

After that, Baggio found the  packet of jewellery next to the rubbish bin. He smelt the smell from the jewellery. He picked it up in his mouth and came towards me. We decided to find the robbers again.

Baggio identified (識別) the smell and starting searching the robbers. After a few minutes, we found that the robbers were sleeping in their car. Baggio attacked (攻擊) them, then I heard some painful shout from the robbers and found the jewellery in the car. I called my partner and I caught the three robbers. Baggio was very brave.

Finally, Baggio received (獲得) the 'Best Police Dog of the Year' award. I was very proud of having him to work with me.

ps

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2011/04/20 14:54
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