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中學作文分享區 - A letter
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17 November

Hi there,

Thank you for your letter. It sounds like you are really enjoying your new school! Let me share my dream school with you. About the curriculm (課程) of my dream school, I want to have a drama lessons. Students can be more creative (創意) and speak more. Also, I want to have Japanese lessons. Some students may want to go to Japan but they don't know how to speak Japanese.

About the activities of my dream school, I want a Reading Club because some students may like to reading books and share with their friends. If there have a Reading Club in my dream school, they will be very happy. Also, I want a Kungfu (功夫) Club. We can protect ourselves and be more health by learning kungfu. Kungfu is also a Chinese culture, so we need to learn it. Besides (此外), I want a Boxing Club. It is more exciting and health to learn boxing, students may like it very much.

For facilities (設備/設施), I want a big swimming pool because we always need to go to the public swimming pool for swimming classes, it's not convenient (方便的). If we have it, it will be more convenient. Also, I want a huge music room because our school music room is small so I need a bigger one. Also, I want a dormitory (宿舍). I usually wake up late. If we have a dormitory, I don't have to wake up that early.

It's great to hear from you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the term!

Love,

Anna

ps

紅色字: 文法有錯誤。

綠色字: 老師加上的。

          : 不用加上的。

 

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哦!!
2011/01/20 09:27
了解!謝謝解說!還有特地回貼^^

那…那段…翻譯起來 換是『…他們喜歡閱讀書並分享於人…嘍!』

恩…現在式進行 和 過去式。加上Eg. 後更加明白了~

有勞分享啦
anna24(anna61224) 於 2011-01-20 18:08 回覆:
不用謝~

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問一下
2011/01/19 12:49
說紅字的部份有錯誤…是哪錯了丫?
如第一段有紅字的部分
『…有些學生喜歡分享自己正在讀的書給朋友…』

我也在學習英文ing,希望有空能告知一下^^thank you~
anna24(anna61224) 於 2011-01-19 16:41 回覆:
謝謝半吊子來捧場!

其實是因為"to"的後面的動詞是不用change to form of the verb

所以"some students may like to reading books"是改為"some students may like to read books"

而 ing form 是分為 present continuous tense 和 past continuous tense(這兩個是最基礎的,要用心的學習!!!!).

anna24(anna61224) 於 2011-01-19 16:42 回覆:
Present continuous tense:

*The present continuous tense describes what is happening now or in the extended present.

e.g. I'm reading a book on baby names.

*The present continuous tense is often used with always to express a repeated action.

e.g. She's always smiling. That's why we call her "Sunshine."

*Frequently we use this form to express a negative reaction to a situation.

anna24(anna61224) 於 2011-01-19 16:43 回覆:
Past continuous tense:

*Use the past continuous tense to describe an action that was in progress at a specific time in the past. The action began before the specific time and may or may not continue after the specific time.

e.g. My mum and I were living on Tenth Street in 1990.

希望你的英文can improve!



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看沒有在寫什麼,早起不就不會遲到,大概全文這句話最重要!
2011/01/18 22:52

看沒有在寫什麼,早起不就不會遲到,大概全文這句話最重要!

早起的鳥兒有蟲吃,早起的蟲兒被鳥吃,所以決定從此不再當蟲,常常遲到!

當蟲也很髒,還是不要交朋友算了^-^!!!

麻煩這1段翻譯成中文,再告訴吃飯來捧場!

Thank you very much and have a very good time in all life so far!

anna24(anna61224) 於 2011-01-19 16:50 回覆:

謝謝吃飯來捧場!

翻譯:

設施,因為我們總是需要去公眾游泳池上游泳課,我想要一個大游泳池,這會更方便。此外,我想要一個巨大的音樂房間,因為我們的學校音樂房間是小的所以我需要一個大。我還要一個宿舍。我總是晚起,如果我們有宿舍,我不用早起。



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感激anna24的分享!!!
2011/01/18 16:52
感激anna24分享的

中學作文分享區 - A letter!!!

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