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夏落秋起添新粧~夏荷秋至忙換裝
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銀杏葉依舊綠翠~白果尚未結實纍

稻禾香仍是青穗~麥浪迎風還遙遠


實夏天還沒有過

其實秋天還要很久

其實繽紛的燦爛未到盡頭

其實蕭索不是唯一的顏色


其實爭艷的不止是春夏

其實芒星燦點越過輕愁

其實金黃更呈現了圓熟

其實夢縈的寫不上葉落


其實很喜歡的~的~詩有許多首......

只是這一首它寫著秋.....................

上心的誰說一定就是愁....

 






 



夏落秋起添新粧    
  
                                                                          
一季秋

紅又黃


靄靄日暮

                
大地似染缸

                                             

鏟起顏色心裡藏             

細細飲    


似酒漿

           
稼農荷鋤日日忙   

勤除草            
                
飄稻香

雀鳥跳躍

枝頭頻端詳

那管得別人笑饞

偷偷的

癡癡想           

                

  

 

 

 
                                                         
夏荷秋至忙換裝  

蓮蓬心

藕成長

虹虹夕照

遍野如畫坊

鈎起丹青心闌茫

暗思量

如醉腸               

搖槳歌兒輕輕唱  

採蓮忙

清風涼

蛙鳴鼓噪         

池岸隨風揚

怎意得它人笑慌

衷心事          

猜猜想

                               

 

 


*一首和朋友對作的詩~~因為喜歡這感覺於是對了後半段

 

 

   

 

 
                                                                      

鏟起顏色心裡藏   
 

( 心情隨筆愛戀物語 )
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Wonderful post
2007/10/20 22:10

great work out with so many images.

This is a wonderful post that the poems supplemented with images
revealed a great deal of centiment and compassion on seasonal changes.

I love it, just love it a lot.

Thanks for sharing.

jenn~吹風版兒(jennliang) 於 2007-10-20 23:50 回覆:

ha..yes, i like this poem a lot, so i put several picture and musical on it...

however, if your read the respond that i reply to vi below, then you might catch how hard is to me...

i think, i won't never do that like this way thereafter....



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火紅
2007/10/08 18:58

秋山 臨楓 臥江 大地盡如火 一般紅


jenn~吹風版兒(jennliang) 於 2007-10-21 00:39 回覆:

秋色萬端倒影 四方皆似火 那樣燒

朋友很謝謝您的推薦..晚 回請見諒...


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一季秋 紅又黃 大地似染缸
2007/10/08 12:42
http://blog.udn.com/chouhwa/1265503
敬請人道支援 我卓越不群的母親

八旬阿嬤
【台灣司法◎人間煉獄】部落格
jenn~吹風版兒(jennliang) 於 2007-10-21 00:45 回覆:

謝謝您的介紹.香山的確很美吔..

之前有在網路上拜讀過..某篇文章..其中也插圖配詩..好美好美的..

晚回見諒.


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A good poem!!
2007/09/23 19:05

Your article is great!!

I can't see any picture!!

jenn~吹風版兒(jennliang) 於 2007-09-23 22:31 回覆:

finally, you might see every pictures clearly now...

as i use 20pcs pic in this article which is a big and hard job, so i linked to another blog of mine, however, it's still hard to arrange each pictures on the right place..i update many times..

it showed different as the place as my put on, even the article is mixed.. or disappear some sentence..how come, the reader record might half make by myself...just to check if the whole words and picture on the corrcet properly..

when i think all is done the good job, and go outting...

and then got your message when i come back....wu....crying....

so, submitting all picture to city albume...and change it one by one .....

do you think all of then is  perfcet right now....