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2010/11/29 18:56:12瀏覽218|回應1|推薦5

Hi story,

Hey how are you doing?
Yes, I know what you mean.
No one likes being blindfolded.
So do you still dream?


Hi story,

You are not supposed to feel lonely.
No, you don't need to apologise.
I wonder who's been changing.
You or he or she?


Hi story,

Now I can clearly see.
I don't mind being shadowy.
Just that sometimes I feel like bleeding.
Do you know that part of me?


Hi story,

Stop telling.
Stop yelling.
Stop making sounds.
That would make life more irritating.


Where are we, story?
You've kept my Hi-s for ages.
Do you have them polished
when you become hi-story?


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Extremely perfect!!
2010/11/29 19:13

What a beautiful poem!

I love the sound when I read it, and your puns are so meaningful!

麵糰仔(ttzuningg) 於 2010-11-29 19:17 回覆:

cheers.

;)