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坪林溯溪    (童詩)                                                    藍魚         2011/09/19    

淅瀝嘩啦

嘩啦淅瀝

丫丫濺了滿天的小水滴

涼涼的水        軟軟的泥

在這蕨類的森林裡       

我們踏遍了頑皮的小腳印

瞧瞧石頭縫裡        藏了什麼樣的祕密

冰冰癢癢

癢癢冰冰

原來是香魚在親我的小肚臍

還有溪哥和苦花魚在嬉戲

看看石頭圍的水族箱裡

爸爸媽媽們放了什麼玩意

一隻小鱉探頭探腦真有趣

幾隻螃蟹一溜煙地就鑽回了河裏

稽稽滑滑

滑滑稽稽

軟軟紅紅的什麼東西

怎麼毛毛蟲在水面溜來溜去

咚的一聲又鑽回了溪底

原來水蜈蚣不會窒息

 

嘻嘻哈哈

哈哈嘻嘻

自然社會美勞加體育

數學國語健康還有成語

為什麼教室不能蓋在這裡

每天都能看豆娘耍把戲

依依不捨

不捨依依

直到太陽掉到山谷裡

我們才依依不捨回家去

寫完了一篇我的小週記


感謝格友建議用自動播放功能, 但考慮不是所有讀者都希望聽配樂, 因此決定還請有興趣的格友按下播放鍵.

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秋玥
歡喜
2013/02/19 21:36

歡歡喜喜

喜喜歡歡

坪林溪底捉魚趣

小蝦也來鬥弄你

苦花不苦也不是花

青苔綠毛實在很滑

山嵐掩映處處有人家

文山包種開水煮香茶

 

秋玥~也很愛在坪林溪谷玩耍的說~

 

Bluefish(hengiwu) 於 2013-02-20 18:50 回覆:
等夏天來再去玩吧!

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I share your decision and appreciated it very much
2011/11/25 01:24
Hi Blue Fish, a wonderful Poem piece. a quality in the work I appreciated very much! Also I share your comments about your decision on not use "Automatic Play" mode for the music. it shows a tremendous respect in your heart and thoughts you have for a reader like me. Really!

Often, I was caught un-guarded by a surprising music rising out of no-where when I was just about to read a poem, or a writing piece, or in middle
of reading the poet's work. It ruined the quality of my first approaching of the poem or writer's writing.

there're more to say about this kind of experiences, but anyhow, thank you greatly for making such critical decision to many other readers like me. --Ps.
Bluefish(hengiwu) 於 2011-12-02 21:57 回覆:

Dear Ps,

Thanks for your comments again. Sorry for the late reply because I am moving to China for my new job these days. I didn't have the time to write poems as many as I wish recently. --Bluefish