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2011/12/10 05:20:41瀏覽1456|回應6|推薦150

冬天的風寒澈骨,捎來了妳的訊息。

涉了這一場情愛,星月冷眼卻無語。

殞落的流星絢爛,像凋零的落花瓣。

滴落的雨碎滿地,睡夢中愁腸寸斷。

無盡的思念迴旋,夜深人靜把妳想。


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清風荷語
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思念
2011/12/14 22:00

聃星兄這詩句

是一字字寫盡我的心坎裡啦

夜靜的只剩下雨聲

人寂寞的只剩下思念...

聃星(forget123) 於 2011-12-15 05:30 回覆:

情困八卦帳

夢醒魂亦斷

靜夜碎雨聲

思念心頭纏


飛雪
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2011/12/10 21:39

一思一念一夜心

一聲輕嘆一惆悵

一字一句復一詩

一人獨仰一聃星

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聃星~不好意思~

飛雪讀你這首美麗的詩

一時手癢就寫了上面詩句

寫的不好~還請聃星別見怪~

聃星(forget123) 於 2011-12-11 08:13 回覆:

一心一意一堅持

一字一詞一斟酌

一人一夜一首詩

一葉一楓一孤星

文章切磋無好壞

順從己心盡情書

聃星祝福您順遂

平安愉悅又開心



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好詩!
2011/12/10 11:19

詩勾起人心底那些 心心 念念

真是一首好詩

只是 有種感傷呢

不過 能 想念一個人 也還是幸福的吧?

聃星(forget123) 於 2011-12-10 15:47 回覆:

人間情愛留萬世

詩詞歌賦傳千載

圓滿結局總難覓

淒美滄桑伴並存


燈塔
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2011/12/10 08:04

涉了這場情愛

像掉入網中

動彈不得

聃星(forget123) 於 2011-12-10 15:44 回覆:

人間情愛總優美

墜入網中難自拔

人海茫茫兩相望

紅塵滾滾嘆無奈


燈塔
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想的空間
2011/12/10 07:56

在這個冬天

想像空間很大

夜長增加了思念的長度

聃星(forget123) 於 2011-12-10 15:42 回覆:

冬天裡晝短夜長

夜深加長了思念

胡思亂想空間大

隨意塗鴉伴夜幕


聃星
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Careless Whisper
2011/12/10 05:21

Careless Whisper

I feel so unsure, as I take your hand
And lead you to the dance floor
As the music dies, something in your eyes
Calls to mind the silver screen
And all those sad goodbyes

I'm never gonna dance again
Guilty feet have got no rhythm
Though it's easy to pretend
I know you're not a fool

Should've known better than to cheat a friend
And waste this chance that I've been given
So I'm never gonna dance again
The way I danced with you

Time can never mend
The careless whispers of a good friend
To the heart and mind, ignorance is kind
Thereâ?™s no comfort in the truth
Pain is all you'll find

I'm never gonna dance again
Guilty feet have got no rhythm, no
Though it's easy to pretend
I know you're not a fool, no, no

Should've known better than to cheat a friend
And waste this chance that I've been given
So I'm never gonna dance again
The way I danced with you

We could have been so good together
We could have make this last forever
But now who's gonna dance with me?
Please stay, stay, stay, stay

I can't pretend no more
Know you're not a fool to cheat a friend
The way I danced with, I'm never gonna dance
I'm never gonna dance again
Never gonna dance again


時光流連,歲月忘返。聃星。