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Last Sunday at the cosplay masquerade, Kyle met a charming girl dressed in elegant dress just like a princess. Kyle fell in love with the lady at the sight of seeing her, since she was so attractive and beautiful. For one monent, Kyle thought that the girl was looking at him, too. And that had made Kyle so excited that he decided to express his emotions in a romantic and wonderful way. After knowing where the lady lived, he brought his guitar and followed her to her apartment. At midnight, the moon appeared and the stars were all shining. That's the moment, Kyle believed, to play a love song for a beautiful girl. Therefore, he started to play the guitar and sang out his love melody. He thought everything was going right, but the residents in the apartment couldn't bear his awful voice anymore, since every note was out of line. Thus, the angry mods opened their windows and started to blamed on Kyle. Facing such an incident, Kyle felt quite embarrassed, but what shocked him the most was one man who lived on second floor. "Oh, no! It can't be true!", cried Kyle, since he saw the remaining cosmetics on the man's face! The girl he had a crush on was a "man" ! The fact was too cruel to him that he just stood still for one minute, thinking about nothing but the once beautifulimage of the lady that gradually faded away With this experience, Kyle decided not to go to the masquerades or parties anymore. But who knows? Maybe the next "girl" he meets will be his true love! 一、以男主角的角度敘寫本文。故事的結局出人意表：原來那位「美麗的女子」竟然是男的！男主角因此決定從此之後再也不參加類似的舞會了，但也預留伏筆，因為下一個遇見的女孩有可能是他的真愛。 二、故事內容有趣，文字駕馭能力佳，故事發展有驚喜。 |
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