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| <資訊系統管理> 現今人手一杯瓶瓶罐罐等物品 , 當作丟棄的垃圾越多 , 卻造成清潔桶供不應求!! Today's society , Canned drinks other items often in the hands of everyone more as discarded rubbish has caused trash can In short supply !!完全錯譯，先是由於中文句式和用詞引致，另一方面論述本身的邏輯亦不合理(多人丟棄垃圾不是造成垃圾桶供應不足的直接”原因”，垃圾桶常滿使人感到不足夠是由於丟棄的垃圾增多，供應(裝設)多少垃圾桶是市政府有關部門的安排，不是由丟垃圾的人決定的。另外垃圾桶的設置並不會用”供求”來描述，因為假如以供求來處理，政府便要每個人配備一個(足夠他丟棄垃圾)的隨身垃圾桶才能達致供應於求。 回說翻譯(照原文)： Nowadays, everyone drinks from bottles or cans, and when more of such rubbish are being throw away, this causes insufficient provision of trash cans.[最後一句我會建議改寫為”造成現有的垃圾桶不足應付處理收集”：this causes inadequate collection capacity by existing quantity of trash cans. 藉由模組化的概念,可方便組裝及拆解 , 可依需求添增清潔桶數量。 大寫修改：With modular concept, IT can be easily assembled and disassembled IN accordance TO the demand to increase the number of trash can。 上方的回收標示,也可依照情況做拔除更換及旋轉到正視角度,使清潔桶不被閒置, 大寫修改： logo on the Recycling NOTICE can ALSO BE REPLACED AND ROTATED TO FRONT ACCORDING TO SITUATIONS so that the trash CAN is not BEING KEPT IN STORAGE。 在視場所空間來更改擺放形式,可高達4種排列模式。 大寫修改：According to different places to change BY four modes can be arranged。 另可修改：According to spatial needs to change the installation with as many as four modes. 產品主要針對杯裝飲料,利用飲料店包裝杯的袋子,可達二次利用環保效果,藉由詳細的細分分類,以及飲料杯層疊的規律性。 完全錯譯，先是由於中文句式和用詞引致…實在無法理解分類和杯子跟包裝袋的分類”規律性”，可能你意思是當人們”習慣”把不同類別的物品分別分類丟棄，便可以造成”二次重複使用再造物”？ 照原文大寫修改： The products are mainly for beverage cupS, use of packaging bags FROM beverage cup [ ] AS the secondary use of recoverY [ ] with detailed classification and drinking cups stacked TO BECOME regularity。 提升清潔人員處理回收物的效率,以及有秩序的管理。 大寫修改：To IMPROVE recyclers(’) HANDLEING efficiency and orderly management. 或略改寫：To improve the handling efficiency and management procedure of the recycler. 響應綠化城市, 應由全民共同維護 大寫修改：Everyone should work together IN MAINTAINING of A green city 。
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只能按有限理解修改翻譯上不妥，當中有些是中文跟英文句法不同的考慮，不是機械式譯文把每字編排便成的，要多注意英文文章在類似的內容的用詞表達方式跟中文的寫法的不同。
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