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2009/05/28 12:52:52瀏覽422|回應1|推薦8

Reality

by cAmilla

Birds are chirping

in the morning.

The sun is shining.

Tree leaves are swinging

in the breeze.

Three hearts are thumping.

Six legs are racing

to the past,

to the future

and

to the hope.

A shower pours down suddenly.

The race ceases.

The mind pauses,

lingers,

realizes,

and 

transforms.

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2009/05/30 20:38
The willows will be weeping
If your poetry shall not be recited in the evening.
The mind pauses
Who is to blame to put them on the blue dusty haze
cAmilla(camillawu2004) 於 2009-05-31 22:20 回覆:

Your understanding the poem has consoled the poet's soul.

Your being able to read between the lines has revealed an episode.

Thank you for being here and leaving me the comfort.

Your insight into the poem's emotions will be treasured forever.