國中有個同學極為喜歡歌手李碧華，好奇的我也買了李碧華的專輯來聽，當中有首聚散倆依依讓人聽了很感動，那天又將那首歌拿出聽了好多變，有所感，於是，我就寫下這樣的作品了，律詩的格式寫來很麻煩，填詞又要照著格式填，所以就隨性寫了，呵 ，隨性是王道呀 ！                                           

                                           《初秋蓮語》

                                             紅塵漫途   初秋又感

                                             多少傷懷往事 

                                             孤單醉夜  竟惹憂思

                                             年年總會回到這裡

                                             池中蓮開   又是憶起

                                             留在此地妳的笑顏

                                             岸石依舊   細望輕拂 

                                             總是難覺枯容淚滴

                                             俯首相思   妳可知否

                                             留連難離總是念起妳

                                             千千心結   難解怎繫

                                             聚是難期   離是註定

                                             只能寄託池蓮   朝暮來相憶

                                              詩／小善．2010．08．27

                                             每年走到懷念之處 藉景念人

                                             種種感觸總是更加的深刻~

                       一種情境 兩樣心情 這首詩先前有寫錯所以拆解重組

                                            五律【夏暖蓮香】

                                            鄉間僻境行，本性喜相迎。

                                            望極山雲媚，聞臨蟲鳥鳴。

                                            池中翩蝶過，岸上靜花生。

                                            顧惜良時伴，詩吟入感情。

                                             詩／小善．2010．08．22

                 美好的情景就如知己一般，總會不自覺投注在自己的詩境中