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熙熙攘攘...繽紛

塗抹舞動的色慾

火山爆破..岩裂漿溢...閃爍中誰在躲藏

黑髮帶著狂野飛竄在無垠霓虹

前一右一..看不到滴落的水珠

趴臥求助的瞬間...雷閃光擊..無情的

從一處而四散

唯一的時機...法王有了迷網...一夜淒風一地落花

深夜昏睡的鏈條..掙脫了


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Thank you!
2011/11/24 09:34
Dear friend, thank you for your recent visitation and kindly recommended a writing piece of mine.  I enjoyed visiting and reading over your work in this blog as well, though I haven't spent enough time as I would like to.

Your writing is, how shall I put it... quite amazing! a work of the mixture of poetic notions and realistic viewing.  Quite unique, to say it gently.

Do have a question for you though... which is,
How did you develop this poem?  Did you develop this poem after viewing the painting, or you develop the poem first without seeing the painting?

Yours,    --Ps.