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一朵埋身血海的玫瑰
用它的荊棘輕吻我的嘴
充滿海水的鹹味
一個浪頭又一個浪頭,冷冽於
吸血族的鼻喉
這夜以繩索圈住昏眩
送給我無眠的夢, 遺忘在海之閣樓
讓我擁抱你的胸膛,生命的頭源
泊泊流出的蜜糖,注滿愛的井泉
但是,情人,我是如此的虛弱
閉上雙眼,飛到你的腹部沉睡,如蝶
一次次落下的吻,封上雙唇的塵土
在憂傷與廢墟之間
我會再愛你一萬年
Dalloway:
I think this first poem narrative, very rich plot transition.
I just analyzed three times, is unable the accuracy which reads out this love poem to have, I thought that this should have the very big relations for a long time with the poet in the foreign life environment, but I like the idea which you compose a poem.
Knows you very luckily, and the blessing life is happy.
-Sha chiou-
I really appreciate your response to my poem and am pleased to have you as a true friend who knows the essence of a poem.