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I had my students write a short paragraph within five minutes with the provided words, " First, Second, Then, At last, All in all." as their wishes. The writings of theirs surprise me and encourage me a lot.

Maria

My friends came to my home because today is my birthday. My mother prepared a lot of food and drinks.

First, my friends and I went to my room. We talked and played the computer together.

Second, we started singing songs and playing games.

Then, we had a great time before my mom came inside the room and pleased us to drink coke and eat a cake.

At last, they gave me birthday gifts one by one.

All in all, I feel happy to have my friends celebrate my birthday with me at home.

Betty

I always see the movies with friends. And if I want to invite them, I will do something.

First, I will say to them, “Do you have free time to see the movies with me?”

Second, we will buy some snack and some drinks.

Then, we will ride bikes to the movie theater together.

At last, we will see the movies at the movie theater.

All in all, I like to see the movies with friends.

Jenny

Today I did some interesting things.

First, I helped an old man cross the road.

Second, I helped a woman to find her sons.

Then, I made some cookies with Melody.

At last, I went to sleep because I was so tired.

All in all, doing some interesting things is truly fun.

Alice

Before I sleep, I will do something.

First, I will prepare my good mood.

Second, I will wash the face.

Then, I will go to the restroom.

At last, I will go to bed with a smile.

And I will have a dream to play Chess with Grandpa Zhou.

Jane

When you have some problems, you should do something.

First, don’t be shy and open your mind.

Second, buy two cups of coffee.

Then, find the person who you want to talk to.

At last, say "Thank you." to him or her.

All in all, face the problem with someone you trust and you will feel relaxed.

Kathy

Dear Melody,

I like to make a cake in my free time, and I also have some tips to teach you.

First, you need to prepare materials, such as a bag of flour, eggs, some spoons of sugar, a bowl of water, and a bowl of milk.

Second, put eggs and flour and pour milk into the bowl.

Then, stir it. And you should pour it into some modes before you take them to the oven. Wait for some minutes.

At last, you can smell and eat the cookies you make.

All in all, it is fun to make cookies.

Best wishes,

Kathy

Tina

Here are some things you do before you want to go to bed.

First, you need to take a shower.

Second, you need to prepare what you need for the classes tomorrow. Then, set the alarm clock at the time you should get up tomorrow.

At last, you need to kiss your family and say good night to them.

All in all, you can dream a good dream when you sleep.

Edison

What will I do when I want to drink a cup of coffee? Here are some tips.

First, I prepare a cup.

Second, I prepare a cup of hot water.

Then, I put a bag of instant coffee in it.

At last, I can enjoy drinking coffee.

All in all, the coffee is yummy. I like to drink it because it cheers me up and makes me stay energetic for a whole day.

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2010/03/27 04:54


A best teacher makes a best student. (名師出高徒)

    They are really good. (的確不含糊)

I read it over and over. (仔細讀了讀)

    They are way better than I (ME?). (自愧我不如)


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Happiness(s222460428) 於 2010-03-28 01:35 回覆:

PD, you are too humble. Your English is  far better than ours.

The usage of " Than" is shared in the link below as PD's reference.

http://forums.eslcafe.com/teacher/viewtopic.php?t=7872

Good night.

Helen