英翻韓語翻譯社
翻譯論文摘要辦事翻譯社本文出自: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/IronMaiden/M.1283328335.A.50D.html有關翻譯的問題迎接諮詢鉦昱翻譯社
印尼文翻譯說話翻譯公司一年多前在這版第一次發文
版大的強烈熱烈回應其實讓小弟受寵若驚
因故裝死了一年多而今天奉上一篇翻譯文 XD
鉦昱翻譯社是煞到在flight 666的版本
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBbHaC632jg part 1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YG_CXEdTIQE part 2
Adrian Smith的這段live solo好棒，第一次聽就愛上了!!
不外在youtube的網友有指出在4:22秒時Adrian的衣服上遽然呈現星星隨後又磨滅
恍如是不鄭重剪到別場的表演 XD
歷史上真的有The Rime of the Ancient Mariner這一首詩
中文譯作"老梢公之歌"或"古船夫詠"
是18世紀英國詩人Samuel Taylor Coleridge所寫的鉅作
而Harris叔叔寫的歌詞並沒有與原作相去太遠
詩中寄意深遠，優裕有基督教的宗教概念
也有外文系的伴侶跟鉦昱翻譯社說過很艱深，我翻到一半就有點反悔了 XD
還參考了一些資料力爭不要翻譯毛病
http://my.opera.com/foxfox1412/blog/show.dml/531455
最後引述在musicradar網站看到的一句話 http://ppt.cc/GRHM
"A 13 minute epic based on a Samuel Taylor Coleridge poem? Oh yes!"
Rime of the Ancient Mariner
老海員之歌
Iron Maiden
（jimmycs 譯）
Hear the rime of the ancient mariner
聽著老梢公的詩歌
See his eye as he stops one of three
當他攔下三人中的一人時那人看著他的眼睛
Mesmerises one of the wedding guests
迷住其中一位婚禮賓客
Stay here and listen to the nightmares of the sea.
停住並聽著這海上的夢饜
And the music plays on翻譯社 as the bride passes by
然後音樂響起，新娘經由
Caught by his spell and the mariner tells his tale.
被他的咒語所吸引，老梢公講起他的故事
Driven south to the land of the snow and ice
開船往南到一個佈滿冰雪的處所
To a place where nobody's been
到一個沒人到過的國家
Through the snow fog flies on the albatross
有隻信天翁穿過雪霧翺翔著
Hailed in God's name翻譯社 hoping good luck it brings.
它被以天主的名叫喚著，進展它能帶來好運
And the ship sails on翻譯社 back to the North
然後船繼續航行，回到北方
Through the fog and ice and the albatross follows on.
穿過霧穿過冰，信天翁也追隨著
The mariner kills the bird of good omen
老舵手殺了這隻有好兆頭的鳥
His shipmates cry against what he's done
他的伙伴對他所做的大聲吼叫
But when the fog clears翻譯社 they justify him
然則當霧散開時，他們釋放諒解了她
And make themselves a part of the crime.
使得他們也變成了犯法的一部分
Sailing on and on and north across the sea
往北赓續地航行經過曆程海洋
Sailing on and on and north 'til all is calm.
往北赓續地航行直到風平浪靜
The albatross begins with its vengeance
信天翁入手下手了它的復仇
A terrible curse a thirst has begun
一個恐怖的口渴責罵已入手下手
His shipmates blame bad luck on the mariner
他的伙伴指責他身上的壞運
About his neck, the dead bird is hung.
死掉的信天翁懸掛在老梢公的脖子上
And the curse goes on and on at sea
然後謾罵在海上不竭地延續著
And the thirst goes on and on for them and me.
口渴也在他們跟我身上不竭地延續著
"Day after day翻譯社 day after day,
日復一日，日復一日
we stuck nor breath nor motion
我們卡住了，沒有任何輕風和消息
as idle as a painted ship upon a painted ocean
就像一個畫中的船停在畫中的海洋上閒置著
Water翻譯社 water everywhere and
水，處處都是水
all the boards did shrink
所有的木板都最早縮小
Water翻譯社 water everywhere nor any drop to drink."
隨處都是水卻一滴也不能喝
There calls the mariner
老舵手高聲呼叫
There comes a ship over the line
有艘船從地平線上行駛過來
But how can she sail with no wind in her sails and no tide.
然則既沒有風也沒有浪潮，她怎麼能夠航行？
See...onward she comes
看...她向前過來了
Onward she nears out of the sun
她從太陽那往前接近過來
See翻譯社 she has no crew
看，她沒有任何船員
She has no life, wait but there's two.
她沒有生命，但那卻有兩個 (翻譯不肯定)
Death and she Life in Death翻譯社
消亡和她這位死中之生命
They throw their dice for the crew
它們對著船員們擲下了骰子
She wins the mariner and he belongs to her now.
她贏得了老梢公而眼前當今他屬於她了
Then...crew one by one
然後船員一個接著一個
they drop down dead翻譯社 two hundred men
倒下去死了，共兩百人
She...she翻譯社 Life in Death.
她，她就是死中之生命
She lets him live, her chosen one.
她讓她所選到老舵手活了下去
"One after one by the star dogged moon,
星星纏著月亮，船員一個接著一個(倒了下去)
too quick for groan or sigh
太快而來不及呻吟或嘆息
each turned his face with a ghastly pang
每一個人臉上帶著極大的疾苦
and cursed me with his eye
並轉過來用眼神亂罵我
four times fifty living men
兩百個活人
(and I heard nor sigh nor groan)
而我聽不見任何的呻吟嘆息
with heavy thump, a lifeless lump,
衰亡的粗笨軀體重重地倒下
they dropped down one by one."
他們一個接著一個地倒了下去
The curse it lives on in their eyes
責罵的恨意還在他們眼裡
The mariner he wished he'd die
Along with the sea creatures
老梢公但願他可以或許跟著海中生物一路死去
But they lived on, so did he.
可是他們繼續活著，所以他也是
And by the light of the moon
在月光之下
He prays for their beauty not doom
他為著他們的斑斓而不是厄運禱告著
With heart he blesses them
God's creatures all of them too.
他懇切地為天主的所有生命祈福著
Then the spell starts to break
然後咒語最早消除
The albatross falls from his neck
信天翁從他脖子上掉了下來
Sinks down like lead into the sea
像個鉛塊沈入了海裡
Then down in falls comes the rain.
然後大雨猶如瀑布般地降了下來!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(配合Bruce叔叔的大叫!!!)
Hear the groans of the long dead seamen
聽著早已死掉的船員的呻吟
See them stir and they start to rise
看著他們攪動並入手下手上升
Bodies lifted by good spirits
仁慈的魂靈舉起身體
None of them speak and they're lifeless in their eyes
他們都沒有講話而且眼裡已無生命跡象
And revenge is still sought翻譯社 penance starts again
報仇延續被尋求著，贖罪的苦行再度入手下手
Cast into a trance and the nightmare carries on.
丟進一個昏迷狀況，然後噩夢延續著
Now the curse is finally lifted
今朝漫罵終於消弭
And the mariner sights his home
而老船員看到了他回家的路
spirits go from the long dead bodies
魂靈從早已死掉的身軀出來
Form their own light and the mariner's left alone.
組成他們自己的光，而留下老舵手獨自一人
And then a boat came sailing towards him
然後一艘船往老舵手這開了過來
It was a joy he could not believe
他盡力到沒法置信
The pilot's boat翻譯社 his son and the hermit翻譯社
一個船員的船，還有他的兒子及一個蓬菖人
Penance of life will fall onto him.
贖罪的苦行生活將會落在他身上
And the ship it sinks like lead into the sea
然後船像個鉛塊一樣沈入了海裡
And the hermit shrives the mariner of his sins.
而蓬菖人赦免了老船員身上的罪行
The mariner's bound to tell of his story
老船員必定會講他的故事
To tell this tale wherever he goes
不管他到哪一個地方他都邑講這故事
To teach God's word by his own example
用他自己的例子來教訓上帝的話語
That we must love all things that God made.
就是我們必需要愛所有上帝締造的對象
And the wedding guest's a sad and wiser man
然後婚禮賓客成為一個哀思並更有智慧的人
And the tale goes on and on and on.
而故事絡續地不休地不休地延續著....
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