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山丹丹開花

 

山丹丹開花

紅豔豔。

毛主席帶咱

打江山。

 

這江山好打,

可皇帝難當。

香書房供出了個

暴虐狂啊!

 

他荼毒百姓,

並屠辱群臣。

搞的國弱民貧,

真丟人哪!

 

幸虧出了個

鄧小平。

改革開放,

求復興。

 

接著又來了

江澤民。

重整乾坤,

救沉淪

 

再來便是那

胡錦濤。

大略雄韜,

幹的更好。

 

繼起又是個
習近平,
立德揚威,
更得佳評。

如今

民富國強,

倡義濟世,
環宇讚揚啊!

.

丹丹開花

紅豔豔。

中國人的風光,

終於是

大好一片哪!

 

貶的貶來、

褒的褒哇。

一部建國史

簡要的寫好了哇。

 

無論為官或為民,

千萬都不要自私自利。

你的一言和一行,

天上人間都記的仔細。

 

留個好名聲,

千古會傳頌。

留個壞名聲,

萬代都心痛啊!

 

 

立國的基礎

禮義廉。

如果是無恥

難久站。


四維與八德

都須保持,
才能保榮華

永光鮮。

山丹丹開花
紅豔豔。
春盛秋衰
冬凋殘。

 
詩人擲秃筆 
不禁讚又歎。 

 
何不乘清風
且去遊霄漢哪? 

 

-- 哈哈哈哈! 

啊?哈! 

 

 
03/06/2011初稿 

09/12/2018稿

 

 

 

版權完全開放 

歡迎譜曲演唱 



 

英文譯詩附後

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When the Red Lilies Bloomed*

 

 

When the red lilies bloomed

with vivid spirit and color,

Chairman Mao rose and led us

to seize the state power.

 

The kingdom was easy to build

but the king was not easy to be.

Worshiped in the temple of book

was a tyrant of the worst degree.

 

He persecuted all his subjects:

peoples and officials as well;

caused such a chaos and suffers:

a shame to the whole world.

 

Fortunately there came

a man name Deng Xioping.

He opened up and reformed,

performing a rebuilding.

 

Successively there came

the man named Jiang Zemin.

He helped rebuilt the country,

saved his poor citizens.

 

Succedingly the nation

was managed by Hu Jintao.

His plans were quite grand,

His achievement was tall.

 

Presently the nation is led

by Chairman Xi Jinping.

Enhancing virtue and power,

he earns more acclaiming.

 

 

Now we are richer and stronger,

can promote moral help others,

thus we won many praise words

coming from the whole world!

 

Now when the red lilies bloom

with vibrant spirit and color.

The scene of our beloved country

is finally, really, much better.

 

 

Some of our leaders are praised,

some are blamed.

The history of our new nation,

so is written briefly.

 

No matter you are officials or people,

never be selfish or self-centered.

All your words and behaviors

can be clearly remembered.

 

Leaving a good name,

you will be lauded for

hundreds of generations.

 

Leaving a bad name,

in hundreds generations

everyone will be heartbroken!

 

 

The foundation of a nation

must be built solidly,

upon propriety, righteousness

and sense of honor.

If both officials and people

are mostly shameless,

the regime cannot possibly

stand much longer. 

.

We must keep and live with our
four-principles and eight-virtues,
so our national glory and luster  

can be brilliant ever and ever.

.

The red lilies beautifully bloom

with more color and jubilation, 

lush in spring and summer time,

wither in autumn and winter season.

.

As an old poet, I admire and sigh.

Suddenly, throw away my blunt pen.

Why not ride with the pleasant wind,

to have a happy vacation in the heaven!?

 

Ah—Ha Ha Ha Ha!

Ah? Haaa!

 

03/06/2011 first drafted

10/22/2018 finally revised

 

 

 

 

 

 

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戈 筆 揚
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2018/10/23 08:18

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   自古,豪壯不礙卑涼。拍臉(清醒一下)

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可憐可恨的中國官
2015/10/16 23:04

無論為官或為民,千萬都不要自私自利。你的一言和一行,天上人間都記的仔細。

抓不完的貪官污吏, 挨不完的民間疾苦 此水幾時休 此恨何時已?
中央和軍中的大頭領, 貪污動輒上百億, 應該讀上面兄台那幾句 !
戈 筆 揚(Y282686) 於 2015-10-19 10:51 回覆:

大家都应该明白这因果道理。作孽是用受惩处的。

多谢先生在此强调此意!


金大俠
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2015/10/11 21:32
大江東去浪淘盡

建國守國人物

花開花謝年復年

言行好壞全錄

金德元先生贊助第十三屆大華府地區「中國新年圍棋賽」

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戈 筆 揚(Y282686) 於 2015-10-14 10:22 回覆:

诗人拾笔鬼画符

在此胡抹乱涂

缘起缘没如朝露

都须破迷开悟


pearlz (中國威脅論)
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2015/10/11 09:13
這是陝北民歌?
戈 筆 揚(Y282686) 於 2015-10-11 20:17 回覆:

诗是既可以写成散文的型式,也可以写成歌谣的型式,

但是诗必有其特质:要有诗味,要有诗意。

老友慧眼。此诗的第一二句,确是摘自陕北民歌。